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【谁帮我改改这段作文.只是个例子:TakemypianostudentCandyforexample.Herfatherisasuccessfulbusinessmanwhoearnsahugeamountofmoneyeveryyear.However,afterlearningthegoodnewsthatCandywonthefirstprizeinapian】
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谁帮我改改这段作文.

只是个例子:

TakemypianostudentCandyforexample.Herfatherisasuccessfulbusinessmanwhoearnsahugeamountofmoneyeveryyear.However,afterlearningthegoodnewsthatCandywonthefirstprizeinapianocompetition,herfathersaidgladly,theawardsmydaughterwonofferedmeamazingfeelingthatnomatterhowmuchmoneyIearnedcannevercomparewithit.

主要改语法和更好的表达.多谢!

陆志东回答:   TakingmypianostudentCandyforexample,herfatherisasuccessfulbusinessmanwithsubstantialincomeeveryyear.AfterlearningthegoodnewsthatCandyhaswonthefirstplaceinapianocompet...

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